先把我最后看的自己准备英一作文的8张手稿放在本文末尾了，本文【模板与素材】中的内容基于我的手稿，是我最后一遍默写完的定稿，书写很潦草，但完成的时间非常快，每一篇我当时都能记得非常清楚，存手机里方便随时看。

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对上篇文章的补充说明

资料：
考研英语资料我只买了黄皮书。黄皮书本身有好多本，还送了一堆东西，我只用了里面的真题和答案解析，别的没时间看，事后证明其他的用不到。作文书没买。英语答题卡要买，主要是作文部分，最后默写自己模板的时候用，找手感。政治答题卡我觉得不用买，大题不用手写叭，背就行了。
网课
作文我看过b站晶婷的视频，不用听她讲，直接找对应的ppt暂停截图，效率很高，收集可能可以用到的句子，再自己改写重组。客观题方面，就真题先做几套看看感觉，要是哪个题型感觉不好，就去找对应的题型看看讲解，不会所有题型都需要看，没那么难。
真题
我做英语真题时只做了所有客观题，主观题所有连题干都没看，到考前几天才看的，也没仔细分析。因为翻译我觉得难度不大，翻出大概意思就可以，没必要多么精确，5个句子大家最多差不出两分，数学一个小题就五分。作文我还是相信背好模板，考场上套就行，预测押题都不靠谱，不要在意，把自己准备的模板背好就可以了。
进程
我在11.1-11.10刷完了15套真题，之后没碰英语了，在学数学专业课。12.5-12.6两天准备了英语作文，再就到考前几天，模拟近三年真题，把自己的作文模板熟练背诵默写。

模板与素材

本文【模板与素材】指笔者总结出的针对应试的具有普遍适用性的通用句式与结构，是符合笔者语言习惯的。风格上并不追求高级华丽的用词，而是尽最大努力不出错。许多人的模板给人感觉上限很高，但实际考场用不出来。我的想法是保下限。
手稿中有几处笔误的地方，本文【模板与素材】中的内容是正确的。
对于准备完成的个人资料，小作文可以称之为模板，大作文的只能叫素材。
因为小作文功能性很强，分为特定的几种类型，考场上遇到哪种网上套就可以，结构是固定的，字数有限制，把固定的句子写上去已经很丰满了，给个人发挥的空间不大。自由发挥那几句一定要扣题，不然分数会很低，模板不背锅。
大作文主要是图画，发挥的空间就比较大了，所以准备是准备素材。首段几句固定的表达要记，比如“从这副xxx的图画中，xxx怎么样（描述），图片下方的文字意义是xxx等等”。主体段看个人能力，还是审题最重要。准备阶段能做的，就是积累个人常用的句式，考场上想到合适的形容词直接往里套。别整复杂的独立主格，插入语，特殊符号那种句式，又不是写小说散文，不推荐。把形式主语，定语从句，状语部分，倒装写的不出错就无敌了。

不会重复

有朋友会担心自己用的别人公开的模板万一和别人重复了怎么办，我觉得不用担心，因为题目的要求和字数的限制程度都很高，没有复杂的逻辑，正确的表达方式一共就几种。再者，考研人数非常多，绝大部分即使准备了，考场上也写不出来或者写的很粗糙。成文几乎不出现语法错误已经很难得了，如果又切题，便是妥妥的高分。

博采众长

有时间最好整理自己的模板。最快的方法是多看几个考研博主的公开免费资料，每个挑几句你觉得写的好的，修改整合成自己的一篇。
注意博采众长，别随便找一份资料把人糟粕取完了。此外，卖付费模板的都是骗子，好不到哪里去。如果就是觉得花钱买资料有安全感，那你微信v我50，我反正按付费的标准写的这篇hhh
可以再找其他好的范文作参考，找ai对一些语句作改写替换，现在生成质量挺高了。最后用【grammarly】修改成自己的定稿模板。

推荐工具：Grammarly

网址：【https://app.grammarly.com】
【grammarly】我很推荐用，最好的语法修改工具，把自己写的文章放上去，会给你正确的修改意见，去官网注册一下就能用了，很快不麻烦，不用付费。
使用方法如下图，在左侧空白把自己的文章输进去，注意字数不要过少，不然无法检测。这里以我建议信的模板为例，如果有语法错误，在【review suggestion】里会提示，右侧【overall score】仅供参考，八九十分就可以了，不必太苛求。【review suggestion】中提供的信息，如果报语法错误一定要修改，报冗余的话，可以根据自己的需要保留。【Get Pro】不需要。

24英一考场上的感觉

考场上和自己模拟的状态会相差很大，多做准备。

不知道其他朋友怎么评价24英一难度，考完没大交流过，我这一家之言。

阅读难度和前两年比挺稳定的，翻译明显简单。

小作文我自己预测到会考建议信，所以很有把握，背得是最熟的（手稿把它放在第一篇）。大作文没人能想到，历史首次，结合了图表，这是英二的内容。以往，这是英一和英二大作文的主要区别，英一考图画，英二考图表。

在考场上，开始答题后，我先看了一眼大作文，是稍微惊了我一下，导致阅读第一篇做的不顺，不过调整过来，越做越好。原因是突然意识到，虽然没写过，但大家都没写过，而且相当于题干给了更多信息，因而不需要自己发散联想，降低了发生跑题与字数不够两个严重问题的概率。唯一的问题就是关于图表描述的用词与句式不够熟悉，但用错扣的也是小分，整体上看是利大于弊，没什么慌的。

题干是网上找的图片，差不多。

24英一小作文

题干

思路

这里只能说一下我当时在考场上的思路，我也忘了当时具体怎么写的，现在重新写一篇没意义，原因提过了，模拟的感觉和考场上的感觉完全不一样，后者更有价值。

题干里【advice】确定类型是建议信。建议信我认为是比较好写的，我模板里首尾段固定的句子很万能。23年英一考的通知，我觉得比较难。难在发挥空间比较小，因为通知通常要求简洁，而且有一些特定表达要记，相比其他类型，不少形容词副词，状语从句是没法用的。

中国科学家我当时只想到了张衡和祖冲之，由于对地震可能的相关用词把握不大，写的祖冲之。先描述了他的成就，然后是他的影响。

【他解决了一些数学难题，发明了不少公式原理，推动了古代中国数学的发展。他不仅在数学方面成果颇丰，作为古代闻名的科学家对后世亦有教育意义与深远影响。】

主体段大概就是上面这几句翻译过去，就够了。我准备考研英语作文时，方法还是中文思维翻译过去。如果能用英文思维直接构思当然是极好的。

范文

还是找了篇范文，写的蛮好。

24英一大作文

题干

思路

英一图画作文刚开始准备时大概会非常懵逼，不知道怎么写。早年真题的图画更抽象，是高考语文漫画那种题的感觉，我连画都看不懂(｡>﹏<)

24这个简单多了，没什么深刻含义，就是小学看图写话那种画，不过是用英文。

题干里横幅上是【市民健身区】，右下角的小蠢货说【家门口新建的小公园真不错！】

开头描述有固定的句式，记一下就好，素材里提到了，下面说下主体段的思路。

有两个主体，明显的是【市民】，不明显的是【政府】。可以从【新建】和【图表】推理出，是【某市】的【政府】发出的【新建】这个动作，公园数量增长一方面是市民的需求，另一方面是政府明智的决策，才能相辅相成。

这道题如果没讨论政府的作用，分数不会高，也不好写，只从市民的角度写字数也很难凑到。

方法就是抓住一切可以利用的信息。

市民视角，很容易想到身体和精神两个角度，身体健康，精神也愉悦。这个图表一个长句描述够了。

政府视角，重视了人们诉求，做出了明智的决策，促进了社会发展，文明进步...

我考场上字数没控制住，写超行了。我模板里通用句式不少，要是考场上从图画里找不到好的角度，纯靠偏过渡的句子，一篇文章也能水完，有基本分的，但这个图画不用。

范文

这范文写的不错：

模板与素材

小作文

1.建议信

Dear Bob,
I hope this letter finds you well. I am delighted to learn about your recent graduation from college. I am writing to provide you with some suggestions on how to find a satisfying job in China.
First and foremost, I believe you must decide on a few potential cities as your ideal workplace. Therefore, it is crucial to meticulously consider which cities align with your preferences and goals.
Additionally, it would be beneficial for you to prepare a resume in Chinese. This will not only demonstrate your commitment to working but also make it easier for potential employers to assess your qualifications.
【Lastly, I recommend ... (绝大部分情况写两点就够了，第三点用于考场前两点均没写出长句的情况，写个简单的第三点凑字数)】
I genuinely hope that you find these suggestions constructive. Please do let me know if there's anything else I can assist you with. I eagerly await your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming

2.道歉信

Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing this letter to express my sincere apology that I have to cancel my travel plan and thus will not be able to visit.
I am sorry for failing to your city because there is a suddenly announced examination which will take up my time. Therefore, I decided to concentrate totally on the review. I know I disappointed you because I cannot pay a visit to you as scheduled. For this reason, I wonder whether it is possible for me to make up for my loss by rescheduling another appointment with you next month.
Once again, I feel sorry for any trouble I have caused and hope you can forgive me. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming

3.投诉信

Dear Sir or Madam,
I regret to have troubled you, but I must express my dissatisfaction with the (物品) that I recently purchased from your online store. Upon inspection, I discovered several issues with the product.
Firstly, the quality of the item fell far short of my expectations. Upon opening the package, I immediately noticed several noticeable scratches on the screen. Furthermore, I was disappointed by the level of after-sales service provided. When I brought this matter to the attention of the shop assistant, I did not receive a satisfactory resolution.
I would greatly appreciate it if you could provide a clear explanation for these issues and propose effective measures to compensate for my inconvenience and loss. I eagerly await your prompt and favorable response.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming

4.通知

Notice
December 24, 2023
Professor Smith is seeking a dedicated and enthusiastic student to join his research project on campus sports activities. The successful candidate will be responsible for assisting in the organization and coordination of various sports-related events, conducting surveys, collecting data, and providing administrative support as needed.
If you are passionate about sports and interested in contributing to meaningful research in this field, we encourage you to apply for this position. Please submit your resume and a brief cover letter outlining your relevant experience and interest in the role to Professor Smith's office by this Saturday.
Thank you for your attention and interest in this opportunity.
Sincerely,
LiMing

5.邀请信

Dear Sir or Madam,
On behalf of all the graduates at my university, I warmly invite you to attend our forthcoming graduation ceremony. We would be honored if you could join us for this special occasion.
The event is scheduled to take place in the auditorium on our campus from 9:00 am to 12:00 pm on June 20. The ceremony will feature speeches by the headmaster and fellow graduates, as well as captivating graduation performances. Following the ceremony, there will be a group photo session, so we kindly recommend that you dress in formal attire. Additionally, we suggest arriving at the auditorium at least 15 minutes before the start of the ceremony.
We would greatly appreciate it if you could accept our invitation and be part of our memorable day. Looking forward to your reply with eager anticipation!
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming

大作文

素材1

Graphically depicted in the caricature is an old man lying on the sports ground, who is rejected by his sons and daughters, guarding their care of their father. The caption at the bottom indicates, "
Without the thought-provoking drawing above, an insightful phenomenon would go unnoticed :
Despite its simplicity, this drawing carries profound meaning. It emphasizes the significance of family care and encourages individuals to value it, which can be elucidated as follows.
There are numerous reasons for this appearance. The primary contributing factor is that young people are currently facing an excessive workload and pressure in their academic and professional lives, including endless coursework and challenging projects at work. Thus, during mealtimes, they crave some personal time instead of conversing with each other. The second noteworthy reason is that social media on smartphones, from engaging video dips to immersive games, exerts a tremendous fascination on the young.
As far as I am concerned, this phenomenon is exceedingly detrimental to young people's mental well-being. Provided that they dedicate more time and energy to the virtual world, the odds are that their ability to focus with be jeopardized.

素材2

As information continues to grow and technology advances, people are empowered with a constant supply of goods that foster happiness.
However, the recent pandemic disrupted trade and business ties, partially reversing the abundance and prosperity, leading to an inevitable shift in mindset and daily habits.
As a result, people are now more inclined to prioritize their own lives and self-actualization. Due to rapid economic globalization and urbanization, we tend to focus on individual and societal progress. However, the importance of family care should not be forgotten, as it is an essential aspect of our lives that provides emotional support, security, and a sense of belonging. Therefore, it is crucial for individuals to strike a balance between personal advancement and caring for their families.
The misbehavior of these individuals can be roughly attributed to their lack of specific knowledge. However, the fundamental reason is that their morality gives in to selfishness, and they become, addicted to the substantial benefits of greedy desire. These commendable actions may stem from people's extensive knowledge... in practice.
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素材3

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